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Friday, 21 September 2018

grace an krisharns naturl disaster world

this is a earthquake and buildings falling down then the whole thing fell down because the earthquake was big that all the buildings were falling down.

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Krishan,
    I really like your earthquake stop motion video. The colours are effective against your background of trees.
    Mrs Krausse

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  2. Annyeonghaseyo, Krisharn. I am Emerald from Rm 3.

    I liked how your color choice of blocks were the colors of the Awapuni School Uniform.

    What you could change, is the word "Natural" in your title.

    What you could do differently, is maybe give some more information in what caused the earthquake. Was it a Tsunami, or a landslide?

    Have you shared this with a buddy?

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