Next time I will make my recount more interesting.
I found it easy to know where my capital letters are.
I found it challenging to make it interesting and better for the reader.
Thursday, 6 August 2020
Awapuni School Fun Run
We were learning about re crafting and editing and making a recount more Powerful.
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Good job Krisharn! I like that you wrote about you and your friends doing the fun run! It's really exciting! The size of the slide is sort of werid but you can fix that, other than that, good story!
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